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Wendy Vardaman reviews The Story of Andro (CD) by R. Virgil Ellis

The Story of Andro (CD). The Chamber Rock Ensemble. Words and vocal by R. Virgil Ellis; with Jeff Lundgren, engineering and guitars; Bryant Guy, drums; Rob Hecimovich, bass; Al Jewer and Duane McCarthy, flutes; recorded by Jeff Lundgren. Woodhenge Productions, www.poetrvellis.com. $15.95.

Reviewed by Wendy Vardaman

Free Verse, Issue #90, 2007, pp. 33-34

 

    Poet and editor Ron Ellis, author of The Blue Train (1990) and Bone Flute (Parallel Press, 2007) doesn't just write. He also performs his poetry with various groups like Fuzzy Logic, which he founded in 1995, and, dating back to 1983, The Chamber Rock Ensemble, which has appeared in Chicago, New York City, Milwaukee, Madison, and other Wisconsin venues. Previous collections include Open My Eyes (1987), Lunar Crescent Wrench (1993), and Hard Science (1999). Ellis calls what he does in these CDs "fusion poetry, in which musical, electronic, and visual elements interact with language."

 

    The poetry that Ellis wrote and recites in The Story of Andro comes from his ambitious, unpublished work The Tenting Cantos, a 100-canto poem available at Ellis's website (www.poetrvellis.com), that explores the boundaries between oppositions in Western thought, e.g., East/West, science/religion, male/female, mind/body. "Canto 27 This fabric canvassing the wind" won an Editor's Prize from Cezanne's Carrot last year and was nominated for a 2006 Pushcart Prize. The Story of Andro comprises Cantos 46-51 of The Tenting Cantos, and is, as its title suggests, a stand-alone narrative paired in various interesting, sometimes ironic, ways with Jeff Lundgren's original music on this CD, which I could imagine played in many contexts, but especially at parties that include intellectual or poetically-inclined guests. The story is by turns sinister and jocular, but always intelligent, playful, and entertaining; Ellis's delivery likewise ranges from cheerful to menacing to cocky to evil, and his poetry, with its careful attention to sound and sonic effects, is well-suited to performance. Five characters, an androgynous heroine) and four villains, appear in Andro, and Ellis mostly succeeds at the difficult task of differentiating them through his varied delivery and different rhetorical devices employed in the poetry: one villain, for example, sprinkles her speech with tongue twisters, much in the manner of Spiro Agnew (note the veiled reference in her name, Agnes Spiral).

 

    Liner notes sketch out the story, giving a much-needed overview and providing brief statements about what happens in each of the Cantos, or Acts, as they're called on the CD. Filled with political, philosophical, and literary allusions, Andro is part science-fiction, part Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance, part allegorical quest narrative that you'd have studied as a college English major, like Pilgrim's Progress or The Faerie Queen or The Divine Comedy. Top that off with symbols and terminology borrowed from Eastern and Western religious traditions, along with a sense of humor, and you have all the elements of an enjoyable, complex, and challenging post-modern text. Andro, short for androgyny, is male and female, daredevil and contemplative, an imperfect pilgrim who rides a "Mahayanaha" (fusing Yamaha, the brand-name, with Mahayana, a type of Buddhism) motorcycle through the "Plains of Free Association" seeking Enlightenment. Along the way she is captured by the militaristic Razzle, who keeps "a hot Pentagon shopping list" and subsequently hands her over to "hard scientist" Sir Richard Adamant for his grant-driven experiments on harnessing the power of Transcendental Meditation for "defense" purposes.

The opening lines of the poem pose its central question:

 

Just when did the anthropomorphizing

empiricizing sexist shrinkage of the European mind

shoot to hell the fusion between the reality of higher beings

and the reality of "natural processes"?

 

    You could also rephrase this question as a philosophical problem with respect to the division of science from ethics, a connection Sir Richard Adamant denies later in the story. But the narrator, who recalls the opening of The Divine Comedy when he mentions woods at Andro's beginning, wants to break down oppositions, merging, in the description of Andro's birth, the "natural" and the "man-made":

 

Outside my woods

a motorcycle winds through enraged gears.

I make it a MECHANICAL HORNET MANTRA—

after all, everything that lives is holy

Another throttle blips me gently,

Air rushes into my gleaming chrome skull,

through my nostril filter,

flows into the carburetor of cause and effect,

pours down the mirror-finish intakes of my lungs

into the cylinders of my concentration,

where pistons of being begin the booming mantra,

flashes of insight ignite the fuel of dharma,

EXPANDING GASSES OF CONSCIOUSNESS

EXHAUST ANALYSIS AS THEY MERGE

WITH THE MONOXIDE OF THE WORLD!

ANDRO EMERGES AWAKENING FROM THE

MURMURS OF THE VOID!

 

    Andro, fierce and contemplative, the "Evil Knevil of meditation," "speaks for herself":

 

Set me up as no wonder woman unless as a snapper

of charmed lariats of words, who flaunts not breasts

but brotherhood, who fondles no penis but sisterhood,

who preaches no editorials and who edits all preachers.

 

    The beginning of "Canto 47," or Act 2, reminds the listener of some of Ellis's modernist influences—Pound, Yeats, Olson, Berrigan —then returns to Andro who employs quest terminology, including its religious elements, in unexpected and tongue-in-cheek ways to describe her pilgrimage/journey; notice as well Ellis's characteristic attention to sound here—his use of soft sand hard c- sounds, which creates the cracking/crackling effect described in the passage:

 

I'm a sight-seer marveling at the country I'm in.

Up ahead samsonite gorillas crack overpass pillars,

dumping crateloads of chickens whose Catholic cackles

echo down canyons of protestant Cadillacs.

"Did you see that...?" the atheist trucker 10/4's

as the CB's crackle over the jostling Episcopalian Speed Queens

and the lurching evangelist do-it-yourself furniture.

Now I duck unraveling Yiddish retreads,

hit a steep agnostic off-ramp full-throttle

and soar over a row of 24 Buddhist used-car lots

 

    At the story's climax, Sir Richard has fully objectified Andro, turning her into "streams of data," and the rest of the story hinges on which of them, or what, controls Andro's body, in a canto that makes virtuoso use of scientific discourse and characterization, moving back and forth from Sir Richard's observations to his state of mind:

 

[Andro] reduces her secretion of norepinephrine by 3.6ml per 34.8cc per hour

(data Sir Richard congenially notes)

induces a slight metabolic acidosis

(data Sir Richard engagingly notes),

reduces her lactate level precipitously, 1026mg per 100cc per hour

(data Sir Richard interestedly notes),

increases her forearm bloodflow by 41 percent

(data Sir Richard fascinatedly notes),

induces her body to vibrate slightly, at 30.8 Hertz

(data Sir Richard surprisedly notes),

 

    As enjoyable as Andro is, however, I did have some difficulty connecting the story laid out in the liner notes to what I heard on the CD until I printed out the poems, only available from Ellis's web site when I worked on this review, and read them on the page. Without them it can be difficult, despite the poet's efforts, to recognize when specific characters speak, especially to understand when they stop speaking, or to realize when Andro speaks in various mind-altered situations; puns, like inner-state/interstate or muscles/mussels, fly by; unfamiliar eastern words like Siddhis, which sounds like "cities" but has to do with spiritual power, can't be absorbed or looked-up. The complexities of "Canto 50," or Act 5, an interesting, ambitious two-voice poem that goes back and forth between Sir Richard indoctrinating Andro, and Andro (and possibly the poem's narrator, as well as,by extension, reader) resisting his brainwashing, are particularly challenging to appreciate without reading the text. Fortunately, the Andro Cantos now include a chapbook along with the CD, because, although the music, with its dynamic flute and guitar parts and electronic effects, is compelling, Ellis's poetry is the heart of the experience and much more meaningful when read as well as heard.